In the lobby of the Jacob Burns Film Center in
Pleasantville, NY there’s a fun piece of art that’s just perfect to stare at
for a few minutes while waiting in line to get in to your movie. It’s one of those complicated Rube Goldberg
contraptions in which balls enter at the top and make their way through a
fascinating series of ramps, levers, see-saws, etc. and end up at the bottom,
only to be reinserted at the top. You
can’t help but be intrigued by how each little part of the mechanism works. The variety seems endless, and the rhythms and
counter rhythms set up by all the balls bouncing through the different parts at
the same time is very entertaining.
Well, at least for a few minutes while you’re waiting for your movie.
That’s my overall impression of The Luminaries, this year’s
Booker prize winner from Eleanor Catton.
At 830 pages, it's one of those big ones that require a tray table on an airplane. Would probably be a good candidate for
reading on an e-reader.
There’s nothing special about the hard copy except that I found the font
to be a little light and hard to read after a while. Catton combines an old-fashioned complicated story
with some newfangled concepts:
Old: A real plot
which is revealed to the reader gradually, point by point, through the entire
book. Lots of characters that are well
differentiated from each other. A striking opening scene that does recall
Dickens, at least in spirit. A trial
scene. A love interest. A who-done-it mystery. Lots of assumed names and legal documents. And a touch of the supernatural, a la Wilkie
Collins.
New: The plot does not unfold chronologically, but rather
the narration jumps around in time, and follows a complex astrological sequence
of precession. While the book is divided
into chapters, the length of the chapters is carefully controlled. The first is 360 pages. The last is less than a page, and there’s a logical (in this case
mathematical?) progression from the length of the first to the length of the last.
The story takes place in the New Zealand gold rush of the
mid 19th century. It’s not a
period I know much about, and that held some interest for me. But except for the Asian influence (a
few Chinese characters and a major role played by opium) and the obvious
British flavor of it all, it all seems familiar from accounts of the California
and Alaska/Yukon gold rushes from about the same time: the chance to start one’s life again in a new
place with new opportunities, the makeshift amenities, the greed, the
improvised and fickle sense of law, the corruption, the alcohol and
prostitution, the eccentric characters, the impermanence of it all.
We enter the outer layer of the plot at a point close to the
end of the chronology, as it turns out.
We gradually follow the wheel around into inner wheels, and then into inner
inner wheels. The mechanism is
fascinating and complex. It’s fun to see
the tiny pieces fall into place one by one.
There are clues skillfully dropped here and there, and also some blind
alleys that end up going nowhere.
But the writing itself is disappointing. It doesn’t have the sharp wit and playful exaggerations
of Dickens, nor the other-worldly glow of Wilkie Collins. It comes across to me as imitative and
bland. There just isn't much beauty or
interest in the words themselves.
And the plot? Well,
there are many many characters, and while Catton does differentiate them pretty
well, I just didn’t really care about any of them. They're elements in a complex
mechanism and are essentially controlled by the mechanism. I
guess the clockwork itself is the point?
Consider, for example, the love interest. There are two characters very much in
love. Their love is very deep, even
supernaturally so. But one of these
characters doesn’t actually appear until near the end of the book, and the
scene in which they fall in love, while we know vaguely of it early in the
book, Catton only describes it near the end, and even there she tells us what
we need to know to understand the machinery.
There’s no glow, no attraction, no human interest. The interest is the mechanism itself. It almost feels like the machinery and the
artificial structural rules are in charge. The result is interesting, but quite detached
and ultimately (for me) unsatisfying.
Not nearly enough to keep me happily engaged through 830 pages. I ended up not caring a whit about the
astrology or the strict structure because I didn’t really care about the
characters or the writing.
How different is Murakami’s 1Q84, a book of about the same length. The plot is also complex (albeit in different
ways), it unfolds in an interesting fashion, and there is a love story at
the center of it all. But here we really
care about the characters, and the love story packs an enormous emotional wallop. Yes of course Murakami is a different
sort of author with different ideas about writing and different goals. But I still find the comparison useful.
The piece on the wall at the Jacob Burns is fun to look at
for a while, but after a few minutes of waiting in line you have your movie. With The Luminaries, that’s it. That’s all she wrote.